Featured Challenge#5 – Rain – Text#2

Into the Rain

by Vinnie Dime

You should go out

Under this heavy rain

Finally something that doesn’t pass through you

It makes you feel real

Eventually

Under its light touch

One and a million

Your sins are washed away

It nourishes you

Softens your skin and your thoughts alike

If you close your eyes

You open your other senses to the world

Which becomes alive

And more precise than ever

While the others are locked in their dry comfortable emptiness

 

 

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